Yeah! We have 6 different strands going! To join in, choose any strand and write a new haiku using the last line of the last haiku in the strand.
Or, for the more creative or stubborn, start a new strand by using the last line of the foundational haiku (that’s the one that’s at the beginning of each strand). Or riff on any existing strand by writing new haiku after the 2nd or 3rd or 4th one, thereby creating a new strand like a new branch of a creek.
1
Bluebells and tulips
should never be both in bloom
But still—such beautyBut still—such beauty
the deer jawbone parched in mud,
teeth, even, intactteeth, even intact,
ache, throb, clenched after reading
ice melts, white bears, dead
2
Bluebells and tulips
should never be both in bloom
But still—such beautyBut still – such beauty.
Seattle springtime washes
everything in gray.
3
Bluebells and tulips
should never be both in bloom
But still—such beautyBut still–such beauty
A forest of pink petals
Cherry trees in bloom
4
Bluebells and tulips
should never be both in bloom
But still—such beautyBut still—such beauty
the deer jawbone parched in mud,
teeth, even, intactteeth, even intact,
ache, throb, clenched after reading
ice melts, white bears, deadIce melts, white bears, dead.
we pretend a misty dream;
Santa’s North Pole cold.
5.
Bluebells and tulips
should never be both in bloom
But still—such beautybut still, such beauty!
laugh lines kvell bubbe’s punim,
to hell with botox!to hell with botox!
chicken fat, patent pending,
fresh from the schmaltz pot.
6.
Bluebells and tulips
should never be both in bloom
But still—such beautyBut still–such beauty
A forest of pink petals
Cherry trees in bloomCherry trees in bloom
Petals fall, tears one year
after tsunami
#3
Cherry trees in bloom
Spring’s colors teasing my eyes
Wonder what might loom
#6
after tsunami
heart heavy aching with grief
the sun insults me
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the sun insults me
exaggerating my years
candlelight was kind
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